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The story you write needs to touch you. If you want it to touch your audience it has to get to you first. You have to really care about the characters. Your readers will love it when you make them feel emotions!
All the emotions. My story has many, everything from anger, outrage, romantic love, hatred, pride, and humor.
--Read it again. Get help if you need to. Have fun with it.